关于求职信的结尾用语: 下面有二组例句,每一组里面(1)句较差,经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。 a: (1)哀求式的句子,不够完整(漏掉面谈时间):i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing 12345678. (2)改写后:may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing 12345678. you can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day. b: (1)怀疑,不妥、不安全的:if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as i'm sure an interview will convince you i'm the man for the job. (2)改写后:i would like to request an interview. you can reach me by telephone at beijing 123456 between the hours of 7-9 a.m. and 5:30-9:30p.m. any evening. c: (1)软弱、羞怯的:if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to talk with you. (2)改写后(较佳):if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.